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Critique Review

I sincerely enjoyed what the class had to say about my composite. Everyone was monumentally respectful and insightful, and I learned a great amount upon experiencing it. One of the best comments was that I should work on my lighting in my picture. Even though I did not intend for my project to be "realistic" in any way, I still had some prevalent lighting issues that I need to pay attention to for the upcoming projects. These critiques are a lot different from mine in high school, and it bothers me that I can not speak out to say my intention right off the bat. Yet, I will learn from it, and I have to get used to it. I AM in art school after all!

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